that is happening i yell!. siting in my chair watching the sun set, holy shiver me timbers is that a flying Racoon 

“hey Mr Box did you see that flying Racoon?.

“yeah he hit me in the face  i was knocked out cold!.

its a tornado one leaf hit the window so hard it shattered the hole window, the next day the whole town was demolished, it was very scary to hide under the table the tornado was called Molly. now she no longer scary and its just the clean up and that will take approximately 6 months and nine days

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  1. Hi Pattrick,

    I LOVED your piece this week. I thought you integrated all of the prompt words very creatively and you created a believable situation. Your description of the violence of the tornado was spot on. Your effort to set out the dialogue correctly was commendable.

    I am really looking forward to your next piece, well done.


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